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@EdwinDownward

What if I missed something [in what I sent to the beta readers] and What if I created a new error [editing after sending to the beta readers]?

This is the scourge of the rushed and easily distracted who have tasked themselves with doing the least fun part of being an author. It's no wonder that the big names in writing have staff.

If your text editor has change tracking, turn it on. Pages on the Mac, and MS Word has it. Chances are open source alternatives have it to, or should. I haven't seen a web suite that has it.

Scrivener lets you take snapshots. You need to be aware the feature IS NOT automatic, and you have to be conscientious to us the feature.

Add the beta changes as you receive them (maybe even adding nonprinting comments), and any changes you yourself make with change tracking on.

The next pass, take care only to change stuff in the changed areas. You can print to PDF and you will get change bars in the margin for reviewing.

It helps. Not perfect, but it narrows what you have to Review Yet Again.

HTH

#BoostingIsSharing

RegEx for Speedy Story Revision

Here are the current iteration of these two RegEx search strings. I will update this post to keep it up to date. The \b requires a beginning- or end-of-word to maximize exact matches. The (?: ) is a non-replacing grouping for multiple words with similar issues, and for he/she matches. Depending on your writing, you may want to change the pronouns to he|she|it|they. Both RegEx rely on NOT selecting Case Sensitive for searches.

  • Negative Protection and Homonyms:

can\b|can't|can not|could\b|couldn't|cannot|shall\b|shan'|shall not|shoud\b|shouldn't|should not|would not|\bwould\b|\bwouldn't|\bwith\b|without|write\b|\bright|lead\b|\bled\b|lede|choose|chose|lose|loose

  • Weasel and Hedge Words:

ly\b|\babout\b|almost|already|barely|\bbit\b|begin|\bbegan\b|\can|certain|generally|\bguess|\bjust\b|kind|\blike|maybe|mostly|near|course|pretty|perhaps|possibly|potentially|really|probably|\bseem|\bsome\b|sort|start|\bstill\b|surprisingly|suppose|\bthink\b|usually|could|\bsaw\b|\bheard\b|\bfelt\b|\bknew\b|\bread\b|noticed|recognized|\band\b|\bbut\b|(?:I|he|she) could (?:see|hear|taste|touch)|(?:I|he|she) (?:saw|hear|knew|read|felt|noticed|recognized) that|you can|made certain

If you use #Scrivener, this is the procedure for turning these searches into Binder/Left-sidebar buttons on the Mac, though probably similar on Windows:

  1. Click the combo-button for Search.
  2. Select Search in Project.
  3. Copy-Paste a RegEx string and press Enter.
  4. Note to the left inside the search control there is a magnifier and a combo-button. Open it. Select at minimum RegEx. I also select the name of my drafts folder, which is Manuscript, and Text so only what I want to revise is shown in the binder. Turn off Case Sensitive if on.
  5. Click Save Search as Collection.
  6. Provide a name in the dialog (it initially displays the RegEx string).
  7. Click View > Binder (if not already check marked).
  8. Click View > Collections (if not already check marked).

If you need to update a collection, use this procedure:

  1. Click the RegEx search collection in the binder. This displays it in the search control.
  2. Copy it from the search control.
  3. Press the minus button in the + - shown to the right of Collections. This deletes only the selected existing search collection. There is no way to directly update a search collection.
  4. Paste your revision.
  5. Follow the first set of instructions to recreate the collection.

On the iPad and iPhone, RegEx search exists but only finds a single word or phrase at a time. Disappointing, but it works. You will find RegEx which you tap gear icon when using Find. You can't save the search, but I put it in the Notes app so I can reference it easily.

The image shows Weasel and Hedge Words in use. In the top left, you'll see the search box with the RegEx, and below it my two collections which are titled 🔍Positives and Negatives and 🔍Weasel and Hedge Words. Note the highlights. Desktop Scrivener shows all matches, making quick review and revision a snap. I've added "and" and "but" and "ly" to highlight overuse of conjunctions and adverbs. There's also double-word error highlighted.

May your editing, revising, and review be simple and swift!

#BoostingIsSharing

Friendly reminder...

You can report censorship and attacks on your local library by right wing trolls here:

ala.org/tools/challengesupport

Here is a list of organizations that may also be able to help you/your community save programs and materials from the chopping block:

Freedom to Read Foundation
Little Free Library
Comic Book Legal Defense Fund
EveryLibrary Institute
PEN America
American Booksellers for Free Expression
The National Coalition Against Censorship

..........

Contact orgs that want to help. Archive media and information you enjoy or care about whenever you can.

#Freedom #FreeThought #FreeExpression #Save #Archive #FreedomtoRead #Fight #erasure and #revision.

www.ala.orgChallenge SupportThe ALA Office for Intellectual Freedom provides confidential support during censorship challenges to library materials, services, and programs. Anyone can report censorship, even if they do not require assistance.